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I AM GOING TO SLEEP (DON'T HESITATE TO CORRECT THE FOLLOWING TEXT)
Good evening everyone,
For a few hours after dinner, I worked on my mechanics and finally, I developed something crazy on Excel.
I went on the Internet, to do some research about "functions" on Excel, and then, around thirty three minutes past midnight, I took my clothes off. And at this moment, I am going to drag my little feet under my blanket.
That was a little bit about my fife, just before sleeping!
You can correct now :-)
Really nice, just make sure that your sentences aren't too long, and not to forget articles like "a" and "an", and prepositions. :)
I AM GOING TO SLEEP (DON'T HESITATE TO CORRECT THE FOLLOWING TEXT)
Good evening everyone,
For few hours after dinner, I worked my mechanics and finally, I developed something crazy on Excel.
I went on the Internet, to make do some researches about "functions" on in Excel, then, around midnight and thirty three minutes after midnight, I put took my clothes off and at this moment now, I am going to drag my little feet under my blanket.
That was few descriptions about my fife, just before sleeping !
You can correct now :-)
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