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I AM GOING TO SLEEP (DON'T HESITATE TO CORRECT THE FOLLOWING TEXT) Good evening everyone, For few hours after dinner, I worked my mechanics and finally, I developed something crazy on Excel. I went on the Internet, to make some researches about "fonctions" on Excel, then, around midnight and thirty three minutes, I put my clothes off and at this moment, I am going to drag my little feet under my blanket. That was few descriptions about my fife, just before sleeping ! You can correct now :-)

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I AM GOING TO SLEEP (DON'T HESITATE TO CORRECT THE FOLLOWING TEXT)

Good evening everyone,

For a few hours after dinner, I worked on my mechanics and finally, I developed something crazy on Excel.
I went on the Internet, to do some research about "functions" on Excel, and then, around thirty three minutes past midnight, I took my clothes off. And at this moment, I am going to drag my little feet under my blanket.

That was a little bit about my fife, just before sleeping!

You can correct now :-)

 

Really nice, just make sure that your sentences aren't too long, and not to forget articles like "a" and "an", and prepositions.  :)

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I AM GOING TO SLEEP (DON'T HESITATE TO CORRECT THE FOLLOWING TEXT)

Good evening everyone,

For few hours after dinner, I worked my mechanics and finally, I developed something crazy on Excel.
I went on the Internet, to make do some researches about "functions" on in Excel, then, around midnight and thirty three minutes after midnight, I put took my clothes off and at this moment now, I am going to drag my little feet under my blanket.

That was few descriptions about my fife, just before sleeping !

You can correct now :-)

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