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Describing my travel
Months ago I traveled to visit my relatives from a small city called São Paulo de Olivença. It’s a really small city in the Amazon. Well, it was my first time there. I stayed with my father for 2 weeks long. two weeks.
The lifestyle from there is most very different of mine. I mean, they don’t have so much many resources to live or do things. Oh, I forgotten to mention, my father is an Indian from the Tikuna tribe and that city is predominantly by Tikuna Indians and other tribes. Ok! continuing… It was very great being there. I could be closer to nature and to know different people and to have gain new experiences. I saw the most REALLY BEAUTIFUL places. However, being sincere, It was very very strange to me, because I am not used at to their lifestyle.
This pic below, I took when I arrived in the small community called Santa Inês, where my relatives live. It’s one of my favorite pics from there. The natural beauty of this place has left me astonished.
I had my first experience driving a motorcycle also, a cousin of mine tried to teach me. I guess I was pretty good for a my first time.
Finally, I can say that I enjoyed the travel. Next year I’ll go back and I hope it is even better than last time.
*Very good job. And nice picture, it sounds like a really good time you had with your family.
Describing My Travel
Months ago I traveled to visit my relatives in a small city called São Paulo de Olivença, It’s a really small city in the Amazon. Well, It was my first time there. I stayed with my father for 2 weeks long.
The lifestyle from there is most different from mine. I mean, they don’t have many resources to live or do things. Oh, I forgotten to mention, my father is an Indian from the Tikuna tribe and that city is predominated by Tikuna Indians and other tribes. Ok! continuing… It was very great being there. I could be closer to nature and meet different people and to have new experiences. I saw most REALLY BEAUTIFUL places. However, being sincere (being sincere is correct, but "to be honest" is used more), it was very very strange to me, because I am not used to their lifestyle.
This pic below, I took when I arrived in the small community called Santa Inês, where my relatives live. It’s one of my favorite pics from there. The natural beautiful of this place has left me astonished.
I also had my first experience driving a motorcycle also, my cousin mine tried teach me. I guess I was pretty good for my first time.
Finally, I can say that I enjoyed the trip. Next year, I’ll go back and I hope it will be more greater than last time.
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