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Could you correct my English?
I am writeing about the rest of my trip in Germany. After we met a strange lady as mentioned before, we headed for the Oktoberfest. The park was more huge much larger than I expected, and since it was Saturday, there were lot of people. There were twelve tents in which each beer company served a special beer for the festival. It was difficult for us to enter the tents. There were many people in front of these tents who couldn't enter it, but they didn't wait in line. We had no choice, so we gave up on to trying to enter the tent. There were many tables outside, so we tried to wait wandering ther until someone left. Fortunately, we found guys standing up from a table soon. We drunk beer and ate delicious German sausage. We couldn't get into the tent, but it was so much fun. I hope we can go there next year.
Could you correct my English?
I will write about the rest of my trip in Germany. After we met a strange lady, as mentioned before, we headed for the Oktoberfest. The park was more huge than I expected, and since it was Saturday, there were a lot of people. There were twelve tents in which each beer company served a special beer for the festival. It was difficult for us to enter the tents. There were many people in front of these tents who couldn't enter it, but they didn't wait in line. We had no choice, we gave up to enter the tent. There were many tables outside, so we tried to wait wandering there until someone left. Fortunately, we found guys standing up from a table soon. We drunk beer and ate delicious German sausage. We couldn't enjoy in the tent, but it was so much fun. I hope we can go there next year.
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