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Topic: Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
After the students finish their high school classes, and prepare for university studying, they will face an important issue, which subject they will learn in university.Some people say that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer, but the other argued that the government should decide which subject students should learn at the university.
They say that it will meet the country’s needs, and also will be better for the students to get a good job after they graduate. But in my opinion, things are not so. On the one hand, the subjects that government decided will not always meet the needs when the students graduate after 4 years, because everything moves so fast. In addition, if they study the subjects that they do not like, there will be no interest for them to further study, and no creativeness for their future work and they will go banal.
If the students are allowed to decide their university’s subject according to their interests, things will be better. Firstly, they will have more passion and willingness to learn more about the subjects, they will be more creative, and they will do better in the future work. Secondly, the interests of the young are likely the same to the needs of the country, because the young always have the curiosity to the things which be born just now and likely be large demand in the future during the development. Because the country and the young are in the same time, in the same condition, they their needs and the interests will allways coincide.
In conclusion, let the students, the young, themselves decide what subject they are likely to study in university, it will be beneficial for both, the government and students. There is no need for government to decide the subjects of students’, and I hope that the government will give them some advice about subjects rather than make the decision for them.
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