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This is Jazmín!
Hello! Let me show you who I am and what I love in the life.
Well, my name is Jazmín, I live in a little country situated in South America, called Paraguay, in a quiet city called San Antonio. The thing that I most love in my city is the church because I love to go to there and meet with good friends and for a chat talk to each other. I like the river too and the big trees and green vegetation. I live with my parents, sister and brothers. also I have a dog too. I love the nature.
I would like to go in to a country where people speak in English and meet make good friends.
If I know this languages is important for my profession, and I desire want to learn English because I like it. I like the way it sounds and I like the English culture. to pronouns the letters, the sounds, the culture.
I studied English for two years but it was a while times ago, now I need to study again. Can you help me?
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This is Jazmín!
Hello! Let me show you who I am and what I love in the life.
Well, my name is Jazmín, and I live in a little country situated in South America, called Paraguay, in a quiet city called San Antonio. The thing that I most love in my city is the church, because I love to go there to and meet with good friends and talk with them. [1] I like the river too, and the big trees and green vegetation. I live with my parents, sister, and brothers. I also have a dog too. [1] I love the nature.
I would like to go to a country where people speak in English, and to make good friends.
If I know this languages is important for my profession. I want/desire to learn because I like it. I like the way the letters and sounds are pronounced, and I also like the culture.
I studied English for two years, but that/it was a long time ago, and now I need to study it some more/again. Can you help me?
[1] Alternative: ..... church, because I love to go there to meet with good friends so we can talk with each other.
[2] Alternative: I have a dog too.
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