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This is Jazmín! Hello! Let me show you who I am and what I love in the life. Well, my name is Jazmín, I live in a little country situated in South America, called Paraguay, in a quiet city called San Antonio. The thing that I most love in my city is the church because I love go to and meet with good friends and talk to each other. I like the river too and the big trees and green vegetation. I live with my parents, sister and brothers. also I have a dog too. I love the nature. I would like to go in a country where people speak in English and meet good friends. If I know this languages is important for my profession, I desire to learn because I like it. I like the way to pronouns the letters, the sounds, the culture. I studied English for two years but it was times ago, now I need to study again. Can you help me?

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This is Jazmín!

Hello! Let me show you who I am and what I love in the life.
Well, my name is Jazmín, I live in a little country situated in South America, called Paraguay, in a quiet city called San Antonio. The thing that I most love in my city is the church because I love to go to there and meet with good friends and for a chat talk to each other. I like the river too and the big trees and green vegetation. I live with my parents, sister and brothers. also I have a dog too. I love the nature.

I would like to go in to a country where people speak in English and meet make good friends.
If I know this languages is important for my profession, and I desire want to learn English because I like it. I like the way it sounds and I like the English culture. to pronouns the letters, the sounds, the culture.

I studied English for two years but it was a while times ago, now I need to study again. Can you help me?

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This is Jazmín!

Hello! Let me show you who I am and what I love in the life.
Well, my name is Jazmín, and I live in a little country situated in South America, called Paraguay, in a quiet city called San Antonio. The thing that I most love in my city is the church, because I love to go there to and meet with good friends and talk with them.  [1] I like the river too, and the big trees and green vegetation. I live with my parents, sister, and brothers. I also have a dog too. [1]  I love the nature.

I would like to go to a country where people speak in English, and to make good friends.
If I know this languages is important for my profession. I want/desire to learn because I like it. I like the way the letters and sounds are pronounced, and I also like the culture.

I studied English for two years, but that/it was a long time ago, and now I need to study it some more/again. Can you help me?

 

[1]  Alternative:  ..... church, because I love to go there to meet with good friends so we can talk with each other.

 

[2]  Alternative:   I have a dog too.

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Hi Jazmin! I'm from Peru and i'am trying to improve my english skills too, if you want we can practice, I'm available now. Good vibes!

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