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Ex-boyfriend
I bumped into an old friend of mine on the street the other day. He and I used to go out back in college. I don't have any feelings left for him for sure. However, he is coming on little strong and wants us to get back together. Now that we both are with someone else, I try to keep our talks casual. But it is getting hard. Do I have to shut him off? Or am I making a big deal out of nothing?
A good piece of writing. Well done!
Ex-boyfriend
I bumped into an old friend of mine on the street the other day. He and I used to go out back in college. I don't have any feelings left for him for sure. However, he is coming on a little strong and wants us to get back together. Now that we both are with someone else, I try to keep our talks (conversations) casual, but. But it is getting hard. Do I have to shut him down off? Or am I making a big deal out of nothing?
Well done! Strikethrough is deletion and highlight is add. I recommend never starting a sentence with "but", however, I know that is a bit old fashioned.
To comment on the action here, if you think he is coming on too forcefully just remind him once then drop him, assuming you do not have other social ties to him.
Ex-boyfriend
I bumped into an old friend of mine on the street the other day. He and I used to go out back in college. I don't have any feelings left for him for sure. However, he is coming on little strong and wants us to get back together. Now that we both are with someone else, I try to keep our talks casual. But it is getting hard. Do I have to shut him off? Or am I making a big deal out of nothing?
I prefer to make two sentences together if you don't mind.
I bumped into an old friend with whom I used to go out with back in college. I don't have any feeling left for him sure; however, he is coming on little strong and wants us to get back our past relationship from we both are with someone else apart. Although I have tried to keep our talks casual, it was getting hard. Do I have to shut him off? Or am I making a big deal out of nothing?
My view is people spend entire life on searching for their own stuble person if you are still single perhaps it is a reason you need to know of what your problems learn from this past relationship apart unless you are going to repeat your situation over an over again. Single doesn't mean you have to accept ex-boyfriend to fill in your lonesome feeling, but to think of what you really need and love is the point for your rest of life rather than focusing on right now I suppose.
Thank you to offer me this chance expressing with my words.
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