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Correct mistakes please) Mary: Jenny why are you stuck there? Get out! Guests cant wait you forever! Jenny: I'm afraid and dont know what I'm afraid. Why I should do that? I can change my mind, right? ohh I think that's mistake, yeah definitely. How I get out from this mess? Mary: wow! Listen! Bobby is waiting for you. he loves you, you love him, so this isn't happiness, is it? What kind of mistake you're talking about? Bobby is so desirable man, every girl envied you! He's real dream of everybody. Jenny: I know, but I'm not sure that I should be marrying now, maybe this isn't right time for it. What am I supposed to do? Mary: That's enough, I called Bobby! jenny: No, no, no! Bobby came to the door. Bobby: Is it alright darling? Mary said you've got some problems, so what kind of problem? Is your dress torn? Jenny: No, dress's nice. Iii.. I don't want to be married and thats not because of you. All problem is mine. Bobby: What!? Are you kidding me? You are gonna say it to me in front of altar or what? Dont be stupid, that'll be a big shame on us, if we cancel everything what we've done! to be continued..

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Mary: Jenny why are you still stuck in there? Come out! The guests can't wait for you forever!
Jenny: I'm afraid and don't know what I'm afraid of. Why I should do it? I can change my mind, right? ohh
I think it's a mistake, yeah definitely. How I get out of this mess?
Mary: Wow! Listen! Bobby is waiting for you. He loves you, you love him.  This is happiness, isn't it? What kind of mistake are you talking about? Bobby is such a desirable man, every girl envies you! He's every girl's dream.
Jenny: I know, but I'm not sure that I should be marrying now.  Maybe this isn't the right time for it. What am I supposed to do?
Mary: That's enough, I called Bobby!
Jenny: No, no, no!
Bobby comes to the door.
Bobby: Is everything alright darling? Mary said you've got some problems, so what kind of problem? Is your dress torn?
Jenny: No, my dress is fine. Iii.. I don't want to get married, but it's not because of you. The entire problem is mine.
Bobby: What!? Are you kidding me? You are gonna say that to me in front at the altar, or what? Don't be stupid.  It would be a great shame on us, if we cancel everything what we've done!

to be continued..

 

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