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A text about my lovely city Manaus <3
Hey, guys!
Well, I'm here to practice more my English and talk to you a little bit about my city.
Manaus is a great city of in the Amazon. I really love my city. If you enjoy nature this is the place!
Here we have a number of activities you can do, and many tourism attractions. By the way, I'm a student of tourism. I am a Professor of Tourism!
Here we have the Amazon river, which is the biggest in the world. Actually, we this is where have the metting of the waters between the Rio Negro (Black river) and Rio Solimões (Solimões river) meet. These rivers do not mix. One is totally black in color and other one has a yeallowish color.
Here you will find very museums and historic old places built in the rubber age, the more rich and successful age of our city. Built during that From that old time we have a wonderful historic place, the Amazon Opera House (Amazonas Theater), built for the rubber's captains producers to watch operas and shows and have fun at that time. This place is amazing, all detailed with "art noveou" (a french art) and others. You can go there for a visitation any time.
About our food, It's so delicious! The tacacá, açaí, tapioca, fish's diversity and so on.
If you have the time free and are planing to travel (and enjoy nature) come here!
Don't worry! There isn't are no alligators crossing the streets and we don't have any jaguars in our homes (lol hahaha).
The pic bellow is the "Amazon Opera House".
Correct me in my text, please"
Kisses :*
Wow, the Opera House is beautiful. Francy, just so that you are aware, typically you do not use exclamation points (!) very often in written English. Many people use them when sending text messages on mobile phones, but you normally don't use them in emails or anything formal. Keep up the good work and good luck with your studies. Also, I am a Professor of Tourism so I would be happy to read more (and help you correct your English) about tourism related topics.
A text about my lovely city Manaus <3
Hey, guys!
Well, I'm here to practice more my english and talk to you a little bit about my city.
Manaus is a great city of the Amazon. I really love my city. If you enjoy nature this is the place!
Here we have a number of activities you can do, and many touristic points. By the way, I'm a student of tourism.
Here we have the Amazon river, biggest of the world. Actually, we have the meeting of the waters between the Rio negro (Black river) and Rio Solimões (Solimões river). These rivers are not mixed. One has a totally black color and the other one has a yellowish color.
Here you will find many museums and historic old places built in the rubber age, the most rich and successful age of our city. From that old time we have a wonderful historic place, the Amazon Opera House (Amazonas Theater), built for the rubber barons to watch opera shows and have fun at that time. This place is amazing, all detailed with "art noveou" (a french art) and others. You can go there for a visitation any time.
About our food, it's so delicious! The tacacá, açaí, tapioca, fish's diversity and so on.
If you have time free and are planing to travel (and enjoy nature) come here!
Don't worry! There aren't alligators crossing the streets and we don't have any jaguars at home (lol hahaha).
The pic below is the "Amazon Opera House".
Correct me in my text, please"
Kisses :*
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