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I Love "Friends" Have you seen "Friends"? I have watched it for almost twice, and I really love it! It is an Americn classic sit com, which is also quite popular among young people in China. Early in my Grade One of my university, my English teacher have introduced it to us many times.He said it is interesting and helpful to learning English, and he also show us some during class.But I didn't watch much that time.Until I was in senior class,I was did some experiments during the daytime, and whenever I was free, it is "Friends Time"! It gives me a lot of fun. I 'd like to say that I like all the six guys:Chandle,Monica,Rachel,Ross,Phebe and Joey. We watch them worked,dated,loved and some time quarels. The friendship among them is very precious and admired. Rachel, who is the first female role I beared in mind. She is so pretty and gentle. When this runaway bride come into central perk. their story start. Her first three years' job as a waitress, and she always said : "If I could make coffe ,i can do everthing." Her "cat" fuffy; Her love with Ross for ten years ; Her daughter Emma. ect. At the end of the play, she got the good job,but she stayed for Ross, luckily it is a happy ending! When I write these words, I can even have the pictures in my mind. And next let's talk about Ross, who has divoiced three times befor 30 years old. He is my favourit role at the half of the play, Paleontologist, who like to watch Discovery Chanel. He has loved Rachel secretly for 9 years. Finally he got her . After their "we were on break" thing. he is toally a different people, Rachel said.When Rachel was pregnant, he didn't her the care and love he should be. anyway they are together at last. (to be continued)

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I Love "Friends"

 

Have you seen "Friends"?

 

I have watched it for almost twice, and I really love it!

I watched it twice, and I really loved it!

 

It is an Americn classic sit com, which is also quite popular among young people in China.

This is an classic American sitcom, which is also quite poular among young people in China.

 

Early in my Grade One of my university, my English teacher have introduced it to us many times.

During my freshmen year at university, my English teacher introduced it to us on several occasions.

 

He said it is interesting and helpful to learning English, and he also show us some during class.

He said it is an interesting and helpful aid to learning English. He also showed it to us during class.

 

But I didn't watch much that time.

But I didn't watch much at the time.

 

Until I was in senior class,I was did some experiments during the daytime, and whenever I was free, it is "Friends Time"!

However when I became a senior, I decided to do an experiment where during the daytime, and whenever I was free, it was "Friends Time"!

 

It gives me a lot of fun.

It sure was a lot of fun.

 

I 'd like to say that I like all the six guys:Chandle,Monica,Rachel,Ross,Phebe and Joey.

I'd like to say that I like all the six characters: Chandler, Monica, Rachel, Ross, Phoebe and Joey.

 

We watch them worked,dated,loved and some time quarels.

We watched them work, date, love and at times, quarrel.

 

The friendship among them is very precious and admired.

Their friendship is very precious to them, which I admire.

 

Rachel, who is the first female role I beared in mind.

Rachel is the leading female protagonist that comes to my mind.

 

She is so pretty and gentle.

[Editor: some guys would object at this characterization, preferring "devious"]

 

When this runaway bride come into central perk. their story start.

When this runaway bride comes into the cafe named Central Perk, their story starts.

 

Her first three years' job as a waitress, and she always said : "If I could make coffe ,i can do everthing."

During her first three years as a waitress, she would always say, "If I can make coffee, I can do everything."

 

Her "cat" fuffy; Her love with Ross for ten years ;

Her cat, Fluffy. Her ten year relationship with Ross.

 

Her daughter Emma. ect.

He daughter, Emma. etc.

 

At the end of the play, she got the good job,but she stayed for Ross, luckily it is a happy ending!

At the end of the show, she got a good job but instead stayed back for Ross. Luckily it is a happy ending!

 

When I write these words, I can even have the pictures in my mind.

Even as I write these words, I replay the scenes in my mind.

 

And next let's talk about Ross, who has divoiced three times befor 30 years old.

Next, let's talk about Ross, who was divorced three times before even turning 30.

 

He is my favourit role at the half of the play, Paleontologist, who like to watch Discovery Chanel.

[Editor: don't quite understand what you mean about favorite role at half of the play]

 

He has loved Rachel secretly for 9 years. Finally he got her . After their "we were on break" thing.

He secretly loved Rachel for 9 years. Finally he snagged her. After his "We were on a break!" blunder.

 

he is toally a different people, Rachel said.

"He's a totally different person," Rachel said.

 

When Rachel was pregnant, he didn't her the care and love he should be.

When Rachel was pregnant, he didn't give her the care and love that he should have.

 

anyway they are together at last. (to be continued)

Anyway they are together at last. (To be continued)

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 It is an Americn classic sit com, which is also quite popular among young people in China.   [Excellent!]

helpful to learning English    [never use "to --ing"] ---->  "helpful to learn English"  or  "helpful for learning English"

At the end of the play, she got the good job, but she stayed for Ross, luckily it is a happy ending!  [Good]

When I write these words, I can even have the pictures in my mind.  --> "As I write these words, I still have the pictures in my mind."
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Friends is my favorite show of all time!

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