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Writing Activity for italki Students: Street Parties and Rubbish in Public Parks In many parts of the world teenagers meet in big groups in the evenings to socialise and have street parties, and enjoy drinking alcohol and soft drinks. They often share their money to buy a bottle of spirits, for example whiskey, vodka, or rum, and mix this with cola or lemonade to make it go further. Their parties frequently continue through the night and can be quite rowdy. In tourist towns, these street parties can be a problem if visitors aren’t able to sleep, and the next morning the streets and parks are often filled with rubbish. Does this happen in your hometown? How do you think tourists feel when they see a park littered with rubbish and broken glass like in the photo? Intermediate activity: 1) Make a list of ten nouns and ten adjectives that you could use to describe this photo. 2) Write 100 words to describe this photo, and use conjunctions to join your sentences together. Advanced activity: You are a concerned citizen and feel that local teens are damaging the tourism industry and you write a letter (250 words) to the editor of the newspaper saying that this needs to stop and action must be taken to clean up the city centre. Use other examples of problems caused by teenagers to back up your argument.

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The photo we have above is a good representation of the youth of the XXI century. I think young people should have freedom to have fun but what we see in the picture is a problem of coexistence and education.

 

It is very sad to see in this state a wonderful park like this, with trees, green grass and located in a tourist place. In Spain is very common this parties but I think the first step to eradicating the problem of dirt and noise starts with education so it is essential the parents and teachers help.

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I love your response, Kasia, and that is exactly how I felt too. It's very sad. Here is my correction; ------- The photo shown above is a great example of what I see when I travel to work every Monday morning. After the weekend (1) the streets welcome you with all the colours of our artificial world we've created as well as (2) the different smells which can not be missed. (3) In the picture there are different shrubs and trees in bloom surrounded by litter, plastic bags, bottles and (4) god knows what else. The already neglected (5) lawn is spotted with white and green coloured patches, which would be really cute if (6) they were flowers, but unfortunately (7) they are plastic sacks. When I look at this photograph I feel sad and frustrated because I can see how (8) nature had been violated by some people who sacrificed (9) the natural world for a little bit of fun.
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The photo shown above is a great example of what I see when I travel to work every Monday morning. After the weekend streets welcome you with all the colours of our artificial world we've created as well as with different smells which can not be missed. On the picture there are different shrubs and trees in bloom surrounded by litter, plastic bags, bottles and gods know what else. The already neglected loan is spotted with white and green coloured patches, which would be really cute if it was flowers, but unfortunately it's plastic sacks. When I look at this photograpf I feel sad and frustrated because I can see how the nature had been violated by some people who sacrificed natural world for a little bit of fun.

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