My hobbies
Hello everyone! May i introduce myself? I'm Duyen i'm from Vietnamese. I like many things but i really love playing basketball. Because it make me fun and i'm stronger. And other important reason- i want to be as tall as European and have sexy body. That's all. How about you?
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My hobbies
Hello everyone! May I introduce myself? I'm Duyen, i'm from Vietnamese. I like many things but I really love playing basketball because it make me is fun and i'm makes me stronger. And another important reason - I want to be as tall as a European and have a sexy body.
massageThat's all. How about you?
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of course,everyone want to have a nice body.I like jogging and fitness.Every day, I workout for toned body and 6 pack XD.
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I tried to correct yours and submit but it seemed it wasnt allowed. So I wrote this comment
"I' instead of "i"
"Vietnam" instead of Vietnamese
" makes" instead of "make"
" a sexy body" instead of " sexy body"
I'm not good at English. I just found some small things and I hope it will help
Hope someone will correct me too if I made any mistake.
Thanks
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