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10/9/2014 I could only hear the sound of rolling waves and the sound of waves splashed onto the beach. The surrounding was dim, I couldn’t figure out why I was here, and I couldn’t see anything. I stretched out my hands trying to move forward. The sand hurt my bare feet so I walked in small steps, afraid of stepping onto sharp stones.

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10/9/2014

I could only hear the sound of rolling waves and the sound of waves splashed splashing onto the beach. The surrounding was dim, I couldn’t figure out why I was there, and I couldn’t see anything. I stretched out my hands trying to move forward. The sand hurt my bare feet so I walked in small steps, afraid of stepping onto sharp stones.

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10/9/2014

I could only hear the sound of rolling waves and the sound of waves splashed crashing/splashing onto the beach. The surrounding was dim, I couldn’t figure out why I was here, and I couldn’t see anything. I stretched out my hands trying to move forward. The sand hurt my bare feet so I walked in small steps, afraid of stepping onto sharp stones.

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