Write about what happened today
It had been rainy for at least a week. But today, all the clouds have gone. The sunshine is shining the earth. What is more. Tomorrow is our Nation Day. So we will have l a holiday for eight days. All that make a good day. Just now I stand on my veranda. The sky is blue. We don't have so much day like today. So I am planning to exercise. God bye.~
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A Piece of Writing About What Happened Today
It had been rainy for at least a week, but today, all the clouds have gone. The sunshine is shining the earth. What is more, tomorrow is our Nation Day; so we will have l a holiday for eight days. All that makes for a good day. Just now I was standing on my veranda. The sky is blue. We don't have many so much days like today, so I am planning to exercise. God bye.~
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