Miracle And Death In The Himalayas

Climbing has become a very popular activity in the last decades, especially in the Himalayas. There It is something like an obsession among some climbers about climbing  mounting the fourteen highest mountains in the world. As a result of this, the Himalayas have turned into a crowded place, where people from all over the world gather. In some cases, they are conscientous and careful people. Unfortunately, there are some mountaineers, whose main goal is to reach the summit at any price, no matter how bad the weather is and how tired they and their Sherpas are. The mountains are dangerous enough without to behaving e in such a way.
The lastest I have heard about this, is the death of two climbers on a mountain called Shisha Pangma, as a result of an avalanche. There was a third climber with them, but miraculously (I don´t know if this word exists), he was found by three Sherpas who risked their lives to save his.

Miracle And Death In The Himalayas

Climbing has become a very popular activity in the last decades, especially in the Himalayas. It There is something like an obsession among some climbers about mounting the fourteen highest mountains in the world. As a result of this, the Himalayas have turned into a crowded place, where people from all over the world gather. In some cases, they are conscientious and careful people. Unfortunately there are some mountaineers, whose main goal is to reach the summit at any price, no matter how bad the weather is and how tired they and their Sherpas are. The mountains are dangerous enough without behaving to behave in such a way.
The last I have heard about this, is the death of two climbers on in a mountain called Shisha Pangma because of as a result of an avalanche. There was a third climber with them, but miraculously (I don´t know is this word exists), (miraculously is a word, you are correct) was found by three Sherpas who risked their lives to save his.

Great job! Just a couple of grammatical errors. :)