Dec 24, 2010:Christmas eve...
I stayed with my parents.And ate the curry flavored chikin.
Gave the present each others.
Then,I opend this sight"italki".
Snow design is nice.I somehow felt fun.
It is snowing tonight.So very cold.
Merry Chistmas,for everyone.And good night.
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Sorry I forgot but you just say "other" not "others"! ^__^
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Dec 24, 2010:Christmas eve...
I stayed with my parents and ateWe gave
Then, I opend this sight "italki".
The snow design is nice.
"I somehow felt fun." The somehow isn't really neccessary and you probably wouldn't say something felt fun. You would either say "I had fun" or "It was fun" if you're saying you had fun on Christmas ^^
It is snowing tonight, it's very cold. You can combine these sentences, "So very cold" doesn't sound right by itself because there isn't a subject.
Merry Chistmas
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I hope I helped! :D ♥
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