About Freedom

I would like to tell you what I really care about. In fact, it's hard to talk about it. However, you need to hear it.
So... The freedom of every person consists in the possibility of choice. This right has been given to us by God Himself, so it's important to keep it.  [1]  Freedom is a very fragile thing. And all and sundry we try to take it away. Now I see as very real dictatorship called freedom.  [??  2]

[1]  Here's a very good variant:  ..., so it's important to safeguard it.

[2]  I do not understand your last sentence.  Do you mean that you now see a dictatorship which calls itself freedom?  If that is what you mean, you could say "Now I see a very real dictatorship which calls itself freedom."  But if you want to say something else, please paraphrase in English, or write the sentence in Russian, and I'll try again to help. .