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someone helps my Journal~♡-♡ Today, I was tired too!  I slept a few time and I went to my school to meet my friends.  Specifically, after sunrise service in my church, I didn't think that I sleep at home.  I had only 3 hours before going to school so, l tried to wake up but I slept finally.  I was late when I woke up so, I took a taxi and I put make up in the taxi.  It was terrible to put make up in a running taxi. I almost threw up.  I was happy even though I took a terrible taxi. (Actually I made it lol.)  It was good to meet people whom I like.  One of my friends who I met today gave a handwriting letter to me.  I was impressed!  I will miss all of my friends and I hope that I will meet friends as them in Canada.

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someone helps my Journal~♡-♡ 
Someone help me with my journal


Today, I was tired too! 

Today I was tired! 

I slept a few time and I went to my school to meet my friends. 
I didn't sleep much but I went to my school to meet my friends. (I changed this line to flow correctly with the ones below it)

Specifically, after sunrise service in my church, I didn't think that I sleep at home. 

After sunrise service in my church, I couldn't go back to sleep.

I had only 3 hours before going to school so, l tried to wake up but I slept finally. 

I had only 3 hours before school starts, so I tried to wake up, but when back to sleep. 


I was late when I woke up so, I took a taxi and I put make up in the taxi. 

I was late when I woke up so, I took a taxi and put my make up on in the taxi.

It was terrible to put make up in a running taxi. I almost threw up. 

It was terrible to put my make up on during a taxi ride. I almost threw up! 

I was happy even though I took a terrible taxi. (Actually I made it lol.) 
I was happy even though I had a terrible taxi ride. (Actually I made it lol.)


It was good to meet people whom I like. 

One of my friends who I met today gave a handwriting letter to me. 

A friend I met today gave me a handwrititen letter.

I was impressed! 



I will miss all of my friends and I hope that I will meet friends as them in Canada.
I will miss all of my friends and I hope that I will meet friends like them in Canada. 

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