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someone helps my Journal~♡-♡
Someone help me with my journal
Today, I was tired too!
Today I was tired!
I slept a few time and I went to my school to meet my friends.
I didn't sleep much but I went to my school to meet my friends. (I changed this line to flow correctly with the ones below it)
Specifically, after sunrise service in my church, I didn't think that I sleep at home.
After sunrise service in my church, I couldn't go back to sleep.
I had only 3 hours before going to school so, l tried to wake up but I slept finally.
I had only 3 hours before school starts, so I tried to wake up, but when back to sleep.
I was late when I woke up so, I took a taxi and I put make up in the taxi.
I was late when I woke up so, I took a taxi and put my make up on in the taxi.
It was terrible to put make up in a running taxi. I almost threw up.
It was terrible to put my make up on during a taxi ride. I almost threw up!
I was happy even though I took a terrible taxi. (Actually I made it lol.)
I was happy even though I had a terrible taxi ride. (Actually I made it lol.)
It was good to meet people whom I like.
One of my friends who I met today gave a handwriting letter to me.
A friend I met today gave me a handwrititen letter.
I was impressed!
I will miss all of my friends and I hope that I will meet friends as them in Canada.
I will miss all of my friends and I hope that I will meet friends like them in Canada.
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