The old language we use

<Recording video images> of my children and their friends having fun, a girl said, 'Your dad is <filming>.' How interesting! The young people who have not seen the thing called film use the old-fashioned language of their parents' (we really should drop the apostrophe!) generation. Our language not so much reflects the concurrency(???) immediacy(?) (concurrent with what? - needs two or more things) of the current times as it functions ('reflects' and 'functions' don't sit well together in meaning) in the previous generation's thinking frame and concepts (what you are trying to say say is obscured by the words not revealed.  Natural Language naturally lags). Our language needs to be renewed. Language is a channel through which we can see the world. The God we believe in is not I WAS but I AM, God of the contemporary. (If language is immediate it is of course unfamiliar and unmungeable).

The old language we use

With a phone I was <recording video images> of my children and their friends having fun, a girl said, 'Your dad is <filming>.' How interesting! The young people who have not seen the thing called film use the old fashioned language of their parents' generation. Our language not so much reflects the concurrency of the current times as functions in the previous generation's thinking frame and concepts. Our language needs to be renewed. Language is a channel through which we can see the world. The God we believe in is not I WAS but I AM, God of the contemporary.

The old language we use

With my phone I was <recording video images> of my children and their friends having fun, a girl said, 'Your dad is <filming>.' How interesting! The young people who have not seen the thing called film use the old fashioned language of their parents' generation. Our language not so much reflects the concurrency of the current times as functions in the previous generation's thinking frame and concepts. Our language needs to be renewed. Language is a channel through which we can see the world. The God we believe in is not I WAS but I AM, God of the contemporary.