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IS THIS GOOD FOR TOEFL? If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. Every city has a problem. If I could change one thing about my hometown, I would do it safe. With safe, the people are freer, without fear to go to some places and they are happier, the city stay more colorful because people stop to put gates and this attract new people to live there. Be safe is a wish of many people of many places. If we are safe, we can be more relax and enjoy more the places and the moments of our lives. In my opinion, be safe is the most important thing I would change in my hometown. Therefore, I would argue that with safe, the city is more pacific and would get peace, go out at night would not be a problem, and the people could trust in other people because they are in peace and safe. The city would be more beautiful; it would not be necessary put big gates and closed windows all the day in the houses because it might not be a risk. The houses could have a garden; the children could play on the street and the parents would stay relax with their children there. Finally, if I could change my city for better, because if one city is safe, people move for it. Everybody wish a calm lifestyle and safe cities are the best place to live. It could be good for economic and the city develop, with more stores, industries and options for a better life. Everybody would be happy and in peace. In conclusion, be safe is very important for the people and for the city. Unfortunallity, all the cities face this serious problem. However, I hope one day that this problem would be solve.

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