Fourth story of autumn.
Hello, Italki.
Today in this world is September 15th.
Half of September. Two weeks of autumn.
Can you imagine, I have already seen the yellow leaves! It's very beautiful.
Autumn - the most magical time of the year. Nature changes its colors every day.
Rain outside my window pouring down.
Music of the rain - it is a miracle.
It is able to wake up the soul. It is able to make us stop, and hear the sound of life.
Rain - one of the most amazing wonders of the world.
It often rains in autumn.
Possibly that is why the autumn of so many thoughts.
Autumn is favorite season of famous writers and musicians.
Autumn it's time the creation.
And I want to express so many thoughts in English.
But my level of English, still does not allow me this.
I think this is the greatest difficulty in studying any new language. When you have so many thoughts, but express them in a new language is not obtained.
But I diligently learning English.
Autumn is also the time of study.
And I hope one day my essays on Italki will not have mistakes.
It will be a very happy day.
Thank you so much for your help.
And let your autumn will be a happy, beautiful and creative.
Helen.
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Hello, Italki.
Today is September 15th.
Half way through September. Two weeks into autumn.
Can you imagine, I have already seen leaves that have turned yellow ! It's very beautiful.
Autumn is the most magical time of year. Nature changes its colours every day.
Rain is pouring down outside my window.
The music of the rain - it is a miracle.
It is able to wake the soul. It is able to make us stop, and hear the sound of life.
Rain - one of the most amazing wonders of the world.
It often rains in autumn.
Possibly that is why autumn is a season of so many thoughts.
Autumn is favourite season of famous writers and musicians.
Autumn the time of creation.
And I want to express so many thoughts in English.
But my level of English, still does not allow me to do this.
I think this is the greatest difficulty in studying any new language. When you have so many thoughts, but expressing them in a new language is so difficult (OR) extremely difficult. But I diligently learn English.
Autumn is also the time of study.
And I hope that one day my essays on Italki will not have any mistakes in them.
This will be a very happy day.
Thank you so much for your help.
And let your autumn be happy, beautiful and creative.
Helen.
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