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140915 Day Book Until last week, I rested because it was holiday in Korea. I made a lot of foods because my relatives gathered my home. It was quiet hard, but I ate delicious foods and met my cousins. It was pretty good time for me. I rested a lot so, I gaind energies. Unfortunately I gain my weight too. On last Saturday, my friend got merried. I was surprised when I listened about her merridge. I had thought I am not that old,but I felt we are not young anymore. She was a first in my freinds. She was awesome,and I thought getting merry when I am younger is better than older. Wedding dress better fits on young bride. However,I don't have a boy friend so, it is just dream.I am so sad.

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Haha,I never have a date with girl so far.I believe that you can find your lover finally.
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140915 Day Book (You can also say "Journal" instead of "Day Book")

 

Until last week, I rested because it was holiday in Korea.

I have been resting since last week due to the holiday in Korea.


I made a lot of foods because my relatives gathered at my home. 


It was quiet quite hard, but I ate delicious foods and met my cousins. 

 

It was a pretty good time for me (You can also say "I had a pretty good time"). I rested a lot so I was able to gaind energy again energies. Unfortunately, I also gained some my weight too.

On Last Saturday, my friend got married merried. I was surprised when I listened heard about her merridge.

I had thought I am not that wasn't old, but I felt it seems we are not young anymore.

She was a first in one of my first friends.

She was awesome and I thought getting merry married when I am younger is better than older.

That's because a wedding dress fits better fits on a young bride.

However, I don't have a boyfriend so right now it is just a dream. I am so sad.

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