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The problems with the endangered animals Nowadays, the improvement of the capitalism in a world which rules thanks to the economy, people have forgot that the nature and wildlife conservation are in a serious danger. If we take a look to the different species of animals in danger we will see that in most cases it is because the human being. Tigers in Asia, rhinos in Africa, as well as whales in the Antartic Ocean, for example, are threatened by the environment. Although it seems something listless, the true is that the good animal's course of life is essential to the humans. Fort this reason, we must face extinction trying that people be concerned about the habitat destruction and the hunting games. Furthemore, we would need to avoid this kind of practice. On the other hand, there are the positive programs of saving animals in danger which want to find new solutions as creating specific ways where animals can live in pace. In this way, just a few people has realised that the endangered species need more help from the humans. To sum up, as far as I am concerned the world needs to focus on the real problem because the future generations will be grateful.

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The problems with the endangered animals

Nowadays, the improvement of the capitalism in a world which rules thanks to the economy, people have forgot that the nature and wildlife conservation are in a serious danger.

If we take a look at the different species of animals in danger we will see that in most cases it is because of the human being. Tigers in Asia, rhinos in Africa, as well as whales in the Antartic Ocean, for example, are threatened by the environment.

Although it seems unrelated, the truth is that  animal life is essential to the human life. For this reason, we must be concerned about the possible extinction of animals especially those due to hunting or habitat destruction caused by humans.
On the other hand, we can create programs that will facilitate the propagation of endangered species

To sum up, as far as I am concerned the world needs to focus on this problem because the future generations will be grateful.

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