A mysterious dream
it happened on this year's summer vocation .One morning ,when I woke up by my alarm,I still merged in my fantastic dream which was very clear at my waking-up moment.however,after a short period ,some fractions of the dream were ambiguous .now ,I can only remember the general part.It said I came to the Britain in the 19th century and had the opportunity of studying there.Meanwhile, I met a person seemed like coming from a noble family .In fact,it was . He left a deep impression on me and I have affections for him.Yet ,what I watched by my eyes were totally different from the truth.The noble man may look like an educated person but actually he wasn't .when I visited his family ,it proved my supposition.…Well ,it is a special dream,and I intend to write a novel based on the dream.
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A mysterious dream
it happened on this year's summer vocation .One morning ,when I woke up by my alarm,I was still merged in my fantastic dream which was very clear at my waking-up moment.however,after a short period ,some fractions of the dream were ambiguous .now ,I can only remember the general part.It said I came to the Britain in the 19th century and had the opportunity of studying there.Meanwhile, I met a person who seemed to be seemed like coming from a noble family which, In fact,it he was . He left a deep impression on me and I have had affections for him.Yet ,what I watched by with my eyes were was totally different from the truth.The noble man may look like an educated person, but actually he wasn't .when I visited his family ,it proved my supposition.…Well ,it is a special dream,and I intend to write a novel based on the dream.
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Nicely written! Good luck on your novel~
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