I have a dream

Many years ago, I had a dream.
I wanted to become a magic teacher. A magic teacher not only helps others, but also flies around the world. Now, however, I've lost very much of my dream. The heavy school work has made me unhappy, and I can't give it up. My mother said that the magic is a day dream. I'm very sad.

I have had a dream

In Many years ago, I had a dream.
I wanted to  become a magic teacher. The magic teacher can not only can help others but can also fly to around the wold. But now,I've lost very much the dream.
The heavy A lot of school work has made make me unhapply, and I can't give it up it. And my mother said that the magic is just a day dream. I'm very sad.

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