It is raining
It is raining outside,it is dark,too.I am sitting and surfing on the internet,alone. Recently I find a new job, every morining I got up at about 6:20,took two buses and it cost me about an hour and 45mins on the way.When I got to my company, I began to learn and do many excel works.At noon, there are only 1 hour left for me to rest including lunch time ,After that, I spent the whole afternoon on my work.when it is half past 5, I went back home. When I arrived at home, it is about 7 o'clock at night. I am so tired. Now it's the time to rest ,but I want to sleep. It's raining outside and It won't disturb me.
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Good effort, Lynn!
It is raining
It is raining outside and it is dark too.I am sitting and surfing on the internet alone. Recently I found a new job. This morning I got up at about 6:20 and took two buses. It takes me about an hour and 45 minutes to get there. When I got to my company, I began to learn and do a lot of spreadsheeting. At noon, there was only 1 hour left for me to rest including lunch time. After that, I spent the whole afternoon on my work. When it was half past 5, I went back home. When I arrived at home, it was about 7 o'clock at night. I am so tired. Now it's time to rest ,but I want to sleep. It's raining outside but it won't disturb me.
Instead of "took two buses" you can say "caught two buses".
Keep to short sentences as this will help you form the grammar.
When we use Excel, we talk about doing "spreadsheeting". :)
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