Windy And Jumper Playing In Garden

Lacking a few 'a's and 'the's but otherwise very well written!

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Windy And Jumper Playing In Garden

Somewhere lived a kitten called Windy. He was ginger red with white paws. He loved running and playing with his brothers and sisters. And he loved his little brother Jumper. They were always together.
Once Windy and Jumper were playing played in their garden. It was a warm summer day and there were a lot of flowers and insects. Windy chased a yellow butterfly that fluttered from flower to flower. Jumper tried to catch a big noisy bumblebee.
“OK, I’ve caught it!” exclaimed Windy. A human could hear his “Meow!”  but only but Jumper understood his brother. Windy was proud but once/as soon as since he opened his mouth to boast, the butterfly fell to the ground and tried to fly away. Suddenly a bumblebee landed on  a flower next to Windy and his butterfly. Then Windy saw these two insects and decided to catch them both for to more boast more.
Jumper was in the tall  high grass nearby Windy and he thought “Ah, there are the butterfly and the bumblebee! I will catch them both…” Windy and Jumper jumped on each other, and but the two insects flew away.
“You’ve jumped well good.” said Windy. “But you haven’t caught anyone!”
“Well, but I can catch your tail!” said Jumper and immediately Windy’s tail appeared in his mouth.
At that moment another butterfly landed nearby the kittens and caught riveted Windy’s attention. Windy forgot neglected his tail was in Jumper’s mouth and jumped onto the butterfly. Well, he caught something... But it was Jumper’s tail!
“Oh, no!” said the kittens together, but a human could only hear their “Meow!” only.