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About the movie <Her> About the movie <Her> I watch a movie called "Her" in these days,you know what is kind of story this movie talk about,let me show you. This movie discribe a man fell in love with a program,They are talk everyday ,He just wear his headphones when he want to talk to her.Is that incredible?I think it's so magical. she is a program without body but she know everything about him,(his email,his job,his wife and so on)because she live in his computer. In addition,her voice is so sex and charming which is so attractive to the lonely man. One day the program had several change to update.she start chating with many people in the same time,which made him hurt and disappoint when he knew about everything. Later,the program is gone,just ruined.He sit down then send a email to his e-wife and walk to his friend apartment and kick the door, his friend look at him and say"she is also gone?" he answer 'ye". At that moment I feel that they are alone in this world.that's why people need to love and to be loved. Even though so many conversation in this movie,I still love it and I hope you'll like this style of movies. PS: The movie filmed in Shanghai of China, which is a beautiful city with amazing night scene.

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About the movie <Her>

About the movie <Her>

I watched a movie called "Her" recently - do you know what kind of story this movie has, let me tell you.

This movie describes a man who fell in love with a computer program. They talk everyday. He just wears his headphones when he wants to talk to her. Isn't that incredible? I think it's so magical.
She is a computer program without a body but she know everything about him, (his email, his job, his wife and so on) because she lives in his computer.
In addition, her voice is so sexy and charming which is so attractive to a lonely man.

One day the program had several changes to update. She started chatting with many people at the same time, which made him feel hurt and disappointed when he found out.

Later, the program is gone, just ruined. He sat down then and sent an email to his e-wife and walked to his friend's apartment and kicked the door. His friend looked at him and said "she is gone?" he answered 'yes'.
At that moment I felt that they were alone in this world. That's why people need to love and to be loved.

Even though there are so many conversations in this movie, I still love it and I hope you'll like this style of movies.

PS: The movie was filmed in Shanghai, China, which is a beautiful city with amazing night scenes.

 

 

Very good!  Work on your verbs for (1) subject verb agreement and (2) verb tense (past, present, future).

 

agreement:

we describe / this movie describes

I wear / he wears

I want / he wants

 

tense (present / past):

today I watch / yesterday I watched

she starts chatting right now / earlier she started chatting

he sits down now / he sat down a minute ago

at this moment I feel / at that moment I felt

 

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