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Park in the morning
I went to a park to practice my photography yesterday morning, and I was so surprised that there were so many people in the park at a such early time. Most of them were old people. Some were dancing, some were singing and some were playing chess. I felt quite lonely, for I didn't belong to any of their groups.
Park in the morning
Yesterday morning I went to a park to practice my photography and I was so surprised that there were so many people in the park at such an early time. Most of them were old people. Some were dancing, some were singing and some were playing chess. I felt quite lonely as I didn't belong to any of their groups.
Very good writing. I hope that the correction helps. :)
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