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Hi for my first note
I am passionate about being a/a passionate hyper-polyglot and philomath. (haha did your dictionary churn that one out!? I'll give you 'philomath' too for good measure) I like not only learning new languages, but also learning about thought, feeling and expression in other cultures/how other cultures think feel and express ('express' needs an object since it is strictly transitive; think and feel may go without).
Hi for my first note
Passionated I am passionate about being a hyperpoligot hyperpolyglot. I like not only learning new languages, but also how people from [1] other cultures think, feel and express themselves [2].
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[1] A culture does not think or feel, therefore I have updated your sentence to refer to people from other cultures.
[2] "Express" is a transitive verb, meaning it must precede the object to which it relates. For example, the following sentence is incorrect:
"I find writing poetry is a good way to express." (Incorrect.)
We must state the object that is being expressed by poetry:
"I find writing poetry is a good way to express my emotions." (Correct.)
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Welcome to Italki, Deniz. Sorry for all the corrections to your first, short Notebook entry. Yet, that is the purpose of a Notebook entry—to help you identify and correct mistakes.
Hi for my first note
I'm passionate about being a hyperpoligot. I love learning new languages. Also, how other cultures think, feel and express.
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