Writing IELTS' task 1; analyzing chart Hi Guys, I am not good at analyzing chart. Could you possibly proofread or point out my mistakes the following note? Thank you for reading. The charts show how the dependence on 3 industries, tourism, service, and agriculture has been changed among 4 nations, namely Germany, USA, Japan, and China from 1980 to 2010. We can see from the charts that in 2010, level of dependence on tourism industry has been shown a significantly increase in Germany, USA, and Japan follow behind with approximately 5 times, 6 times, and 1.4 times higher than in 1980 with exception of China. On the other hand, there is likely to be a period of stability in the rate of reliance on agriculture industry. In China, the dependence of agriculture even decreased from nearly 80 % in 1980 to almost 50 % in 2010. In level of dependence on service industry, there was no distinguish change in 4 countries. Among them, Japan still held the lead follow by the service section, 60 %. Thus, the graph tell us that in 2010, many countries were more likely to expend tourism industry rather than others to 1980 so we can infer that while primary industry has been declining, the portion of tertiary industry has been showing a remarkable increase for 30 years. Especially, this trend was more predominant feature among developed countries rather than a developing country, China. Because of the decrease of dependence on agriculture in China, many Chinese might migrate in urban areas.