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Romantic and Pratical I moved to a new house last year. There was a lot in front of my house. I planned to use it to plant some flowers. “Why not planning fruits and vegetables?" my neighbour said . She was a accountant before retiring. She‘s a down -to -earth woman. She never waste a penny. She always buys somthing she needs when the department store is offering discounts . Everyday ,she goes to a market where she can purchase the cheapest food . Although it is10 miles from our house estate. Yesterday ,she showed me her new reversible coat. Don't think she is short of money. She runs a supermarket， which makes a good profit. " Planting fruits is good. the pleasant smell of fruit is spreading everywhere all year round."she said. She plantes pitaya trees,papaya trees, plum trees...tress bend beneath the thick clusters of rich fruit which bow their branches to the ground. She reaps fruits now and then. Everytime she brings us some. But I think she is more show-off than shares. " Look ! I harvest again. I told you many times to plant fruites , but you never follow me .What is the use of planting flowers? Flowers are good-looking but useless. " she continuted lobby . I gave her fraint smile , said nothing ， watering my flowers. My flowers were in bloom, they were open with such delight, so many reaching out marvellous. The peach tree stands pink, the daises are out too, in sheets ... I am not a utilitarian. I often spend my money on somthing seems useless,such as orange -shaded light cover , a chicken-like inkstone box, .a facial make-up in Beijing opera ..but I never regret. How wonderful when I work in the orange lamplight! What a pleasant to read among flowers! Last spring, my dear neighbour overworked and fell ill . I picked a bunch of gardenia to see her. The flowers perfumed the whole room. She looked at me gratefully. " The flowers accompanied me during my illness " later she told me ,"This is the first time for me to see such a beautiful flower."

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Again, your style is very nice, even where the grammar has some mistakes. I have written some alternatives and tried to match your style. I hope they are ok.

Romantic and Practical

I moved to a new house last year. There was a garden allotment lot in front of my house. I planned to use it to made plans for planting some flowers.

“Why not planning plant fruits and vegetables?" my neighbour said asked.

She was an accountant before she retired retiring. She‘s a down-to-earth woman who She never wastes a penny. She always buys somthing what she needs when the department store is offering discounts.

Everyday, she goes to a market where she can purchase the cheapest food, although it is 10 miles from our housing estate. Yesterday, she showed me her new reversible coat.

Don't think she is short of money. She runs a supermarket which makes a good profit. 

“Planting fruits is good. The pleasant smell of fruit is spreads everywhere all year round." she said. She plants pitaya trees, papaya trees, plum trees ... trees bend beneath the thick clusters of rich fruit which bow their branches to the ground.

She reaps harvests fruits now and then. Everytime she brings us some. But I think she is more showing-off than sharing. “Look ! I have harvested again. I told you many times to plant fruit, but you never follow me my suggestion.What is the use of planting flowers? Flowers are good-looking but useless." she continued lobby to press.

I gave her a faint smile, but said nothing, watering my flowers.

My flowers were in bloom. they were Open with such delight – a mass of radiant petals so many reaching out marvellously.

The peach tree stands pink, the daises are out too, in sheets ...

I am not a utilitarian. I often spend my money on somthing seemingly useless objects - such as an orange-shaded light cover, a chicken-like inkstone box, a facial make-up Beijing opera make-up, but I never regret it. How wonderful when I to work in the orange lamplight! What a pleasure to read among flowers!

This spring, my dear neighbour overworked herself and fell ill. I picked took her a bunch of gardenia to see her. The flowers perfumed the whole room. She looked at me gratefully.

" The flowers accompanied me during my illness " she later she told me , “This is the first time for me to I have seen such a beautiful flower."

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Romantic and Pratical

I moved to a new house last year. There was a lot in front of my house.
I planned to use it to plant some flowers.

“Why not planting fruits and vegetables?" my neighbour said .

She was an accountant before retiring. She‘s a down -to -earth woman. She never waste a penny.
She always buys somthing she needs when the department store is offering discounts .
Everyday ,she goes to a market where she can purchase the cheapest food . Although it is10 miles from our house estate. Yesterday ,she showed me her new reversible coat.

Don't think she is short of money. She runs a supermarket， which makes a good profit.

" Planting fruits is good. the pleasant smell of fruit is spreading everywhere all year round."she said.
She plantes pitaya trees,papaya trees, plum trees...tress bend beneath the thick clusters of rich fruit which bow their branches to the ground.
She reaps fruits now and then. Everytime she brings us some. But I think she is more show-off than shares.
" Look ! I harvest again. I told you many times to plant fruites , but you never follow me .What is the use of planting flowers? Flowers are good-looking but useless. " she continuted lobby .

I gave her fraint smile , said nothing ， watering my flowers.

My flowers were in bloom, they were open with such delight, so many reaching out marvellous.
The peach tree stands pink, the daises are out too, in sheets ...

I am not a utilitarian. I often spend my money on somthing seems useless,such as orange -shaded light cover , a chicken-like inkstone box, .a facial make-up in Beijing opera ..but I never regret. How wonderful when I work in the orange lamplight! What a pleasant to read among flowers!

Last spring, my dear neighbour overworked and fell ill . I picked a bunch of gardenia to see her. The flowers perfumed the whole room. She looked at me gratefully.
" The flowers accompanied me during my illness " later she told me ,"This is the first time for me to see such a beautiful flower."
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Romantic and Pratical

I moved to a new house last year. There was a lot in front of my house.
I planned to use it to plant some flowers.

“Why not planting fruits and vegetables?" my neighbour said .

She was a accountant before retiring. She‘s a down -to -earth woman. She never waste a penny.
She always buys somthing she needs when the department store is offering discounts .
Everyday ,she goes to a market where she can purchase the cheapest food . Although it is10 miles from our house estate. Yesterday ,she showed me her new reversible coat.

Don't think she is short of money. She runs a supermarket， which makes a good profit.

" Planting fruits is good. the pleasant smell of fruit is spreading everywhere all year round."she said.
She plantes pitaya trees,papaya trees, plum trees...tress bend beneath the thick clusters of rich fruit which bow their branches to the ground.
She reaps fruits now and then. Everytime she brings us some. But I think she is more show-off than shares.
" Look ! I harvest again. I told you many times to plant fruites , but you never follow me .What is the use of planting flowers? Flowers are good-looking but useless. " she continuted lobby .

I gave her fraint smile , said nothing ， watering my flowers.

My flowers were in bloom, they were open with such delight, so many reaching out marvellous.
The peach tree stands pink, the daises are out too, in sheets ...

I am not a utilitarian. I often spend my money on somthing seems useless,such as orange -shaded light cover , a chicken-like inkstone box, .a facial make-up in Beijing opera ..but I never regret. How wonderful when I work in the orange lamplight! What a pleasant to read among flowers!

Last spring, my dear neighbour overworked and fell ill . I picked a bunch of gardenia to see her. The flowers perfumed the whole room. She looked at me gratefully.
" The flowers accompanied me during my illness " later she told me ,"This is the first time for me to see such a beautiful flower."
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Romantic and Pratical

I moved to a new house last year. There was a lot in front of my house.
I planned to use it to plant some flowers.

“Why not planning fruits and vegetables?" my neighbour said .

She was an accountant before retiring. She‘s a down -to -earth woman. She never waste a penny.
She always buys somthing she needs when the department store is offering discounts .
Everyday ,she goes to a market where she can purchase the cheapest food . Although it is10 miles from our house estate. Yesterday ,she showed me her new reversible coat.

Don't think she is short of money. She runs a supermarket， which makes a good profit.

" Planting fruits is good. the pleasant smell of fruit is spreading everywhere all year round."she said.
She plantes pitaya trees,papaya trees, plum trees...tress bend beneath the thick clusters of rich fruit which bow their branches to the ground.
She reaps fruits now and then. Everytime she brings us some. But I think she is more show-off than shares.
" Look ! I harvest again. I told you many times to plant fruites , but you never follow me .What is the use of planting flowers? Flowers are good-looking but useless. " she continuted lobby .

I gave her fraint smile , said nothing ， watering my flowers.

My flowers were in bloom, they were open with such delight, so many reaching out marvellous.
The peach tree stands pink, the daises are out too, in sheets ...

I am not a utilitarian. I often spend my money on somthing seems useless,such as orange -shaded light cover , a chicken-like inkstone box, .a facial make-up in Beijing opera ..but I never regret. How wonderful when I work in the orange lamplight! What a pleasant to read among flowers!

Last spring, my dear neighbour overworked and fell ill . I picked a bunch of gardenia to see her. The flowers perfumed the whole room. She looked at me gratefully.
" The flowers accompanied me during my illness " later she told me ,"This is the first time for me to see such a beautiful flower."
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Romantic and Pratical

I moved to a new house last year. There was a lot in front of my house.
I planned to use it to plant some flowers.

“Why not planning fruits and vegetables?" my neighbour said .

She was a accountant before retiring. She‘s a down -to -earth woman. She never waste a penny.
She always buys somthing she needs when the department store is offering discounts .
Everyday ,she goes to a market where she can purchase the cheapest food . Although it is10 miles from our house estate. Yesterday ,she showed me her new reversible coat.

Don't think she is short of money. She runs a supermarket， which makes a good profit.

" Planting fruits is good. the pleasant smell of fruit is spreading everywhere all year round."she said.
She plantes pitaya trees,papaya trees, plum trees...tress bend beneath the thick clusters of rich fruit which bow their branches to the ground.
She reaps fruits now and then. Everytime she brings us some. But I think she is more show-off than shares.
" Look ! I harvest again. I told you many times to plant fruites , but you never follow me .What is the use of planting flowers? Flowers are good-looking but useless. " she continuted lobby .

I gave her fraint smile , said nothing ， watering my flowers.

My flowers were in bloom, they were open with such delight, so many reaching out marvellous.
The peach tree stands pink, the daises are out too, in sheets ...

I am not a utilitarian. I often spend my money on somthing seems useless,such as orange -shaded light cover , a chicken-like inkstone box, .a facial make-up in Beijing opera ..but I never regret. How wonderful when I work in the orange lamplight! What a pleasant to read among flowers! 

This  spring, my dear neighbour overworked and fell ill . I picked a bunch of gardenia to see her. The flowers perfumed the whole room. She looked at me gratefully.
" The flowers accompanied me during my illness " later she told me ,"This is the first time for me to see such a beautiful flower."

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