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i love basseball
hi people, i want learn english, i love basseball, i was pitcher in a academy the baseball, want someone help me learn english and chat sometimes...
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I love baseball.
Hi people! I want to learn English. I love baseball, and I was a pitcher in school [I am unsure of what 'a academy the baseball' means, so I took a guess and said 'school']. I want someone to help me learn English and chat sometimes.
i love basseball
hi people, i want learn english, i love basseball, i was pitcher in a academy the baseball, want someone help me learn english and chat sometimes...
I love baseball! Hi people. I want to learn English. I love baseball, and I was a pitcher in a baseball academy. I want someone to help me learn English and chat sometimes.
So let me make a few comments. "I" is always capitalized. You also want to use sentences, ending in a "." rather than running several ideas together with commas. Commas are really only for lists of for separating two clauses that each have a subject and verb. As to chatting, people on italki are great at giving corrections!
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