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Introduce myself Thank you for your fast reply. I am very glad to meet you.First,i will introduce myself for you I am a country girl,i came from chinese country,my home town is Henan province Puyang city.there is one old sister and one young brother in my family,we are very friendly each other. I am working for chinese compony that named SunWay,its major production is mobile antenna,i am antenna engineer.i joined it after i graduated from university ,i has worked here for 6 years until now With the fast expanding of the compony,we added more forien customer,so,i need improved English,i know italki website by a english radio,so,i signed up it,i hope i can know more friends and improved my english listening 、writing and reading I am very glad to teach you chinese if you want to learn chinese~ If there has any mistake,pls point out ann discuss it ~

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thank you very much i persist in writing journal,pls give me more attention,let us be good friends
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Introduce myself

Thank you for your fast reply.

I am very glad to meet you.First,i will introduce myself for you

I am chinese ,my home town is Henan province Puyang city.I have an old sister and a young brother,and we are very friendly with each other.

I am working for a chinese company that is named SunWay,its major production is mobile antenna,i am an antenna engineer.i joined it after i graduated from university ,i have worked here for 6 years now .

With the fast expasion of the compony,we have more foreign customers,so i need to improve my English,i know italki website by a english radio,so i signed up it,i hope i can meet new friends and improve my english listening 、writing and reading

I am very glad to teach you chinese if you want to learn chinese~

If there has any mistake,pls point out ann discuss it ~

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Very impressive effort! You have a fantastic grasp on the English language! A few corrections: - Instead of saying "I came from chinese country", it is more common to state "I am Chinese" or " I am from China". - When talking about your siblings I would suggest saying "I have an older sister and a younger brother, and we are very friendly with each other." - Not compony, but "company" - "I am working for a Chinese company that is named SunWay." - "I have worked here for 6 years now" - "With the fast expansion of the company, we have more foreign customers, so I need to improve my English." -"I hope I can meet new friends" -"If there are any mistakes" These are just little grammatical errors that are easily fixed. As I said, I am very impressed by your understanding of the English language so far!

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