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Is it all right? Charlie had been swimming for a few minutes when he got a muscle cramp.Fortunately, his instructor realized what was happening and jumped into the pool to help Charlie.

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Is it all right? alright?

Charlie had been swimming for a few minutes when he [suddenly] got a muscle cramp.Fortunately, his instructor realized what was happening and jumped into the pool to help Charlie.

 

This read really well, just a very minor suggestion!

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