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Story I'm going to write a little bit today. It has been a long time without writing anything on this page.Here I am with my cup of coffee inspired to practise. I worked very hard with my english then, but now I'm lazy. I think because it's summer and everyone has to enjoy summer, don't them? Today lied on the beach, I tried to record myself to listen it afterwards. It didn't make me feel better with my english because I have forgoten many word that I am sure before I know. what I should do is look for english people nearby, and speak almost everyday for a while in english. Thanks

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     It has been a long time since I've written on this page, but here I am with my cup of coffee; inspired to practice. I used to work hard on my English, but now I feel lazy because it's summer and we should enjoy summer, shouldn't we?

     Today I laid on the beach and recorded myself speaking in English. I listened to it afterwards. It didn't make me feel better about my English, because I have forgotten many words that I am sure I knew before. I should look for English speakers nearby and talk with them often.  

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I'm going to write a little bit today.
It has been a long time since I have written without writing anything on this page, but now.Here I have am with my cup of coffee, and I am inspired to practice practise.
I worked very hard on with my English in the past  then, but now I've m grown lazy. I think it's because  of  it's summer and everyone has to enjoy summer, don't they them?

Today lied on the beach, and I tried to record  my voice myself to listen to it afterwards. It didn't make me feel better about  with my english because I have forgoten many words that I should have known am sure before I know.

What I should do is look for English people nearby, and practice speaking  English with them almost everyday for a while in english.


Thanks

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yellow= capitalize that letter
crossingout= not needed/ there's a better way of saying it
blue = what I put instead
green= I moved it/switched places

 

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