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Conversation / My husband's sickness Please check my awkward English and correct it so it sounds like natural English. ----- (me) Hi, we are good, he went to clinic a few days ago. In this clinic, doctor said his probrem is neck.‏ But it's not sure, because he is not take an X-ray, he don't like X-ray, but he has to take it.‏ (Mr) ‎yes please say him take x ray please please..‏ (me) ‎Sure. He is always slow starter... but I talked about neck's tumor, one of our friend took an operation for neck's tumor, he was numb his sholder, my husband also numb left sholder, so I concern about it. Don't worry, I will take him to a checkup soon. I'll report to you again.‏ By the way, your daughter often call us via Skype, a few days ago, she waited your connecting, she want to talk with you. And she said next connecting to you, she call me and talk 3 persons, you and me. I have never talk 3 persons on Skype, but I'll try if I can get a chance. If you can, please call to her. she miss you, I think she is innocent girl. See you, Take care‏

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By the way, your daughter often calls  us via Skype, .   a  A  few days ago, she waited  your connecting  for you to connect,  because  she want to talk with you. 

And  s  She said  next connecting to  the next time she connects with  you, she  will  call me and  talk 3 persons, you and me  all three of us can talk.
I have never talked with   3 persons  three people  on Skype, but I'll try if I can get a chance.
If you can, please call  to  her.  s  She miss you, .  I think she is  innocent  a lovely  girl.

See you,  and   T  take care‏. 

 

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(Me)
Hi, we are good. He went to the clinic a few days ago. At the clinic, the doctor said his problem is his neck. But it's not certain, because he has not taken an x-ray. He doesn't like X-rays, but he has to take it.

 

(Mr)

Yes, please tell him to take an X-ray.

 

(Me)

Sure. He is always hesitant, but I talked about neck tumors. One of our friends had an operation for a neck tumor, because he was numb in his shoulder, and my husband is also numb in his left shoulder, so I am concerned about it. Don't worry, I will take him to a checkup soon. I'll report to you again.

 

By the way, your daughter often calls us via Skype. A few days ago, she waited for you to connect, because she wanted to talk with you. And she said the next time she connects with you, she will call me and all three of us can talk. I have never talked with three people on Skype, but I'll try it if I can get a chance. If you can, please call her. She misses you. I think she is a lovely girl.

 

See you, and take care.

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(me) 

Hi, we are good, .   h  He went to  the  clinic a few days ago.  In this  At the  clinic,  the  doctor said his  probrem  problem  is  his  neck.‏
But it's not  sure  certain, because he  is  has  not taken  an X-ray, .   h  He  don't  doesn't  like X-rays, but he has to take it.‏

(Mr)
‎ y  Yes,  please  say  tell  him  to  take  an   x  X-ray please please..‏

(me)
‎Sure. He is always  slow starter  hesitant...,  but I talked about neck's  tumors, .   o  One of our friends   took  had  an operation for  a  neck's  tumor,  because  he was numb  in  his sholder,  and  my husband  is  also numb  in his  left sholder, so I  am  concerned  about it.

Don't worry, I will take him to a checkup soon. I'll report to you again.‏

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Conversation / My husband's sickness

Please check my awkward English and correct it so it sounds like natural English.

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(me)
Hi, we are good, he went to a clinic a few days ago. In this clinic, the doctor said his problem is his neck.‏
But it's he's not sure, because he is has not taken an X-ray, he don't doesn't like X-rays, but he has to take it have one.‏

(Mr)
‎yes please say tell him to take have an x ray please please..‏

(me)
‎Sure. He is always a slow starter... but I talked about neck's tumour, one of our friend took an operation for neck's tumour, he his shoulder was numb his sholder, my husband's left shoulder was also numb left sholder, so I am concerned about it.

Don't worry, I will take him to a checkup soon. I'll report to you again.‏

By the way, your daughter often calls us via Skype, a few days ago, she waited your connecting was waiting for you to come online, she wanted to talk with you.
And she said next after connecting to you, she called me and talked to 3 people, you and me.
I have never talked to 3 persons people on Skype, but I'll try if I can get a have the chance.
If you can, please call to her. she misses you, I think she is an innocent girl.

See you, Take care‏

 

All the best, hope he gets better soon!

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