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notebook- caderno well.. today i went to my college, then i went to the mall... to buy chocolates! hahaha! and after this , i went to may home to dinner with my family!.. i think that is just this!..

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well.. today i went to my college, then i went to the mall... to buy chocolates! hahaha! and after this , i went to my home to dinner with my family!.. i think that is just this!..

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Well, today i went to my college, then i went to the mall to buy chocolates! hahaha! And after this, i went to my home to have dinner with my family! I think that is just great!

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     I went to my college today, and then I went to the mall — to buy chocolates.  after that, I went home for dinner with my family. 

     Capitalization of personal pronoun "I"; improper use of the exclamation point; use of the punctuation dash; improper use of ellipses; improper word order. It is important to understand that unlike the spoken English language, the English written language should be grammatically correct. 

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notebook- caderno

well.. today i went to my college, then i went to the mall... to buy chocolates! hahaha! and after this , i went to my home to dinner with my family!.. i think that is just this!..

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well.. today i went to my college, then i went to the mall... to buy chocolates! hahaha! and after this , i went to my home to dinner with my family!.. i think that is just this!..

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