The Carousel

Life is like riding on a merry-go-round, called the ‘Solar System’. Your mom put you on this whirligig one fine day, and you can't leave it get off untill it stops the end. People especially enjoy celebrating their every turnover (circulation) full orbit journey around the Sun. I celebrated my thirty eighth turnover orbit last Winter, but instead of yelling “Happy Regular Turnover Orbit Around the Sun Day!” my guests yelled cried out, “Happy Birthday!” :)
By the way, when you were I was 28, I celebrated my ten thousandth day riding on the Earth. My next anniversary is going to be in 2030, when I celebrate my twenty thousandth day of being here. Whoever loves numerology can celebrate these and other days, for example, the 11111th day of life and a lot of others. It is always possible great to find a cause reason to drink a glass of wine or invite friends. If you're wondering, here you can find out see a what the ‘distance’ in days is between two dates, and how many days it takes to travel. Please visit this link:
http://www.timeanddate.com/date/duration.html
I really like this merry-go-around very much.

I'm just giving you an alternative correction :)

As you already said and other days before your example I think you should omit the and a lot of others :)

The Carousel

Life is riding on a merry-go-round called the ‘Solar System’. Your mom put you on this whirligig one fine day and you can't leave it till the end. People especially celebrate their every turnover full orbit (circulation) around the Sun. I celebrated my thirty eighth {38th} turnover orbit last Winter. But instead of yelling “Happy Regular {or "Completed"} Turnover Orbit Around the Sun!” my guests yelled, “Happy Birthday!” :)

By the way, when you were I was 28, I celebrated my ten thousandth day* riding on the Earth. My next anniversary is going to be in 2030, when I celebrate my twenty thousandth day of being here. Whoever loves numerology can celebrate these and other days, for example the 11111th day of life and a lot of others. It is always possible to find a cause to drink a glass of wine or invite friends. If you are wondering, here you can see a ‘distance’ in days between two dates:

http://www.timeanddate.com/date/duration.html

I really like this merry-go-around very much.

*Or "When one is 28, one celebrates the ten thosandth day..."