Today I couldn't get up.
The alarm-clock rang at 6.20 a. m. like every day, I didn't hear it, a friend called me by my phone then I got up quickly and I had a shower , drank a coffe with a little milk, so I took my car and I drove to my work . 57 Km, when I arrived there , I drank a tea and again I start the new journey.
¡I want to a rich woman as `Paris Hilton.! I need a rented life.
could someone correct this text, please?
Thanks.
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Today I couldn't get up.
The alarm-clock rang at 6:20am. Like every day, I didn't hear it. A friend called me by on my phone then I got up quickly and I had/took a shower, drank a/my/some coffe with a little milk. so Then I took my car and I drove to my work 57 Km away. When I arrived there , I drank a tea and again I start the new journey.
¡I want to a rich woman like `Paris Hilton.! I need a rented (i dont know what you mean by "rented") life.
could someone correct this text, please?
Thanks.
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You don't want to be Paris Hilton. She's still checking into rehab or going to jail quite frequently. Not much of a life if you ask me.
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