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Write about.... When I wake up today, I'm gonna eat a ice cream and I acessed italki. I'm brazilian and I want learn all of english. I don't like wake up at morning to go for school, but I know that is very important to my life. I was born in Itu, here in Brazil, but I moved to the other town and I prefer her. My best friend, Julia, is really funny! My family is funny too, but I don't like when all of them treat me like I can't take care of myself. One day, Julia and I went to a park in our city. Was really funny, 'cause the toys are dangerous and insane. I'm gonna with my family to the beach. I like the sun, the sea, the sand... I love beaches and I loved that travel!

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When I wake woke up today, I'm gonna eat a ate an ice cream and I accessed italki. I'm brazilian and I want to learn all of English. I don't like wake waking up in the morning to go for school, but I know that it is very important for my life. I was born in Itu, here in Brazil, but I moved to another town and I prefer it here.

My best friend, Julia, is really funny! My family is funny too, but I don't like when all of them treat me like I can't take care of myself. One day, Julia and I went to a (theme park?) park in our city. It was really funny (fun), because the toys (toys are small) rides are dangerous and insane.

I'm gonna going with my family to the beach with my family. I like the sun, the sea, the sand... I love beaches and I loved that to (or the) travel! 

 

Funny - did you mean 'fun'? Funny things make you laugh, like comedy, while fun things are fun, like games.


A theme park is where there are roller coasters and other rides...was that what you meant?


Make new paragraphs when writing about new topics.


Keep up the work :)

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