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Hello everyone! My name is Raphael, and I come from Brazil. I live in the North-East of Brazil, in a state called Pernambuco. I am learning English and I hope to help people who would like to learn Portuguese.

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Hi Raphael, your introduction was good, just a few observations that I hope will help you:

"Hello Guys." - I changed this to 'everyone'. The noun, 'Guys', whilst in the plural can be used to address everyone, also has a masculine meaning. It is also a bit informal, and should really be used amongst people who you know.

"I am Raphael" - This is not incorrect, but when addressing a group, it is more common to say: "My name is ..."

"i live in Pernambuco." - 'I', is always capitalised, no matter how it being used. I added some information about where you live as well.

"learning english" - Capitalise adjectives formed from proper nouns: "learning English"

"and i" - Again, capitalise 'I'.

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Hello everyone. My name is Raphael from Brazil and I live in Pernambuco. I am learning english and i hope to help people that want to learn Portuguese.

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Hello everyone. My name is Raphael from Brazil and I live in Pernambuco. I am learning English and i hope to help people that want to learn Portuguese.

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Hello Everyone. My name  is Raphael from Brazil, I live in Pernambuco. I am learning English and I hope to help people that want to learn Portuguese.