A Travel To The Seaside
Three days ago, my family went to the seaside of Huizhou to spend our holiday. Although it was rainy the first day, but the children were still very happy,they liked to dabble in the water and play with sand. They infected us with their brilliant smiles.
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A Travel Trip/Journey To The Seaside
Three days ago, my family and I went to the seaside of Huizhou to spend our holiday. Although it was rainy the first day, but the children were still very happy. They liked to dabble in the water and play with the sand. They infected us with their brilliant smiles.
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