First note : In vacation to SPAIN close MALAGA
In this moment when I am writing these words , I am on my deck of my flat with a see view. The temperature is ideal, more and less 28°. The sun is always there, almost all days.
Present day, this is Sunday and I benefit to improve my level english. I discovered Italki today. I hope to help some people to improve in french.
As this is the first note, I begin by that little text.
See you soon.
Frédéric
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First note : On vacation in SPAIN close MALAGA
At the moment I am writing this , I am on the deck of my flat with a sea view. The temperature is ideal, around 28°. The sun is always out, most of the time.
Today is Sunday and I am benefitting from improving my English. I discovered Italki today. I hope to help some people to improve their French.
As this is the first note, I have begun with just a little text.
See you soon.
Frédéric
(Hi, Frederic,
Your English is spelt correctly (minus 'see' instead of 'sea') so there are no problems there, however I have corrected and rephrased things in order to make it sound a little natural, like a native English speaker. Hope I helped!)
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