Hello Eda,

You've done exceptionally well with this note, and you're trying combinations of phrasing that most students wouldn't try. It's tremendously commendable. 

I would recommend that you take some time to think about your writing before you start. There is a lot of rambling in your note that isn't necessary. I get the feeling you have a word count, for example 250 words, and you don't know what to say, and consequently you have a lot of redundancy in your writing. 

What is the best source of news?

Some people believe that the internet is the best source of news, whilst others people think that news is better presented better newspaper in newsprint [you are talking about the format of the presentation, so it is Internet vs newsprint]. As far as I am concerned, I hold to the idea that the best source of news is the Internet because of its reliability and pace.

The main reason for my propensity for thinking/believing/feeling that the internet is the best source for the of news is its reliability. For instance, about many an current issues are easily found we can find a lot of news easily. , since either most of media companies or most of and news agencies which prove that provide news to the public have their own formal website and they must generally report real news for to preserve their image.

In the contrary case the reality about certain case or news can be published on the other internet website. In some cases Actually, we can come across fabricated news in the some instance on the Internet, and in this time when we do, we should prefer read/consult the offical website of agencies to have actual get accurate knowledge news. Most of the people have the idea that because of extreme information on the internet it is difficult to rely on the Internet news because of false information. In my opinion, instead of reading the news on newsprint as a hardcopy we may should read the news on the internet because ,both of them are they are both the same . Also it is best case not to spend more paper. and it is better for the environment.

 
The other reason to have read news via the Internet is that pace, for example, fast changing events like the nowadays most of people follow the news about war between Israel and Palestine. Internet news allows us to read updates When we want to read the news or watch the news video related to the war we can do this very fast quickly. The news Far away news reaches from us in just a few seconds. Or we could Otherwise we should wait until tomorrow for a new edition of the newspaper. By this means we can keep abreast of all of the latest development at any time.

Consequently, Because of reasons that I mention above internet is the best source for news rather than newspaper. Taking into account of all these factors I believe the Internet is more useful than a newspaper.

What is the best source of news?

Some people believe that the internet is the best source of news. Other people think that news is better presented in a newspaper. As far as I am concerned, I hold to the idea that the best source of news is on the internet because of its reliability and speed.

The main reason for my propensity for believing that the internet is the best source for the news is reliability. For instance, we can find a lot of news easily about an issue, because either most of media companies or most of news agencies which provide news to the public have their own formal website and they must report real news to preserve their standing. On the contrary, case the truth about news or a certain issue can be published on another internet website. In fact, we can come across fabricated news in the some instances and in this case we should opt for an offical website of agencies to have proper knowledge . Most of the people have the idea that because of the extremities of information on the internet, it is difficult to rely on any news. In my opinion, instead of reading the newspaper as a in hardcopy, we may read the news on the internet; both of them are the same. Also, it is best case better not to waste more paper.

The other reason for receiving news via the internet is that speed. For example, nowadays most of people are following the news about the war between Israel and Palestine. When we want to read the news or watch a video related to that war, we can do so very quickly. The news from far away comes to us in just a few seconds. Otherwise, we would have to wait until the next day for a new newspaper. By this means of the internet, we can keep abreast of all of the latest developments at any time.

Consequently, because of reasons that I have mentioned above, the internet is the best source for news rather than a newspaper. Taking into account of all of these factors, the internet is more practical than newspapers.