Introduce My Self

Hi,  i  I  am Lin Huei Min . My friends usually call me "Min". I come from Taiwan . There are five  numbers  people  in my family. They are my parents , two brothers and one sister. I want to communicate with  an  English speaker. I want to make more friends  in  around  the world . However  i  I  have to improve my English skills.

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Hi, I am Lin Huei Min. My friends usually call me "Min". I come from Taiwan. There are five people in my family. They are my parents, two brothers, and one sister. I want to communicate with an English speaker. I want to make more friends around the world. However I have to improve my English skills.

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Welcome to italki, Min.  Please do not worry that I made so many corrections to your introduction.  Most of the corrections were capitals ("I" not "i") and spaces (no space " " before a comma "," or a full stop ".", and one space after).  Your meaning was clear and your spelling was good.