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A weird wish If I could make a wish right now It would be: being blind for a weak. It sounds crazy, doen't it?. Well, I have some reasons for it. A blind person can't judge others. I wouldn't care what others might think about me. I would not take for granted the fact of life being changed in only a fraction of a second. I would be able to see through their voices the happiness and struggles that people around me might be going through. I would come to learn to read the souls intead of reading the faces. Some funny aspects are involved as well. I would not care about the type of cloths I would be wearing on, no matter how funny or indecent this might be. If I got short of money, people would give it to me if I ask for. I would not have the need of being standing up while going in a bus, and the best thing is that I'd have a cane to kick your ass if you mess with me.

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A weird wish

If I could make a wish right now It would be: being blind for a week. It sounds crazy, doesn't it?. Well, I have some reasons for it. A blind person can't judge others. I wouldn't care what others might think about me. I would not take for granted the fact of life being changed in only a fraction of a second. I would be able to see through their voices the happiness and struggles that people around me might be going through. I would come to learn to read the souls intead of reading the faces.

Some funny aspects are involved as well. I would not care about the type of cloths I would be wearing on, no matter how funny or indecent they might be. If I got short of money, people would give it to me if I asked for it. I would not have the need of being to standing up while going on a bus, and the best thing is that I'd have a cane to kick your ass if you messed with me.

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A weird wish

If I could make a wish right now It  it would be: being to be blind for a weak week. It sounds crazy, doesn't it?. Well, I have some reasons for it. A blind person can't judge others. I wouldn't care what others might think about me. I would not take for granted, the fact that life could  being changed in only a fraction of a second. I would be able to see  listen to through people's their voices the happiness and struggles that people around me might be going through. I would come to learn to read the[ir] souls intead of reading the[ir] faces. [if referring to specific people]

Some funny aspects are also involved. [alternatively you could try: "I also think there would be some light hearted momements"] I would not care about the type of clothes I would be wearing on, no matter how funny or indecent this they might be. If I got short of money, people would give it to me if I asked for it. I would not have to stand on the bus  the need of being standing up while going in a bus, and the best thing is that I'd have a cane to kick your ass if you messed with me.

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