About Me :)

At first glance, when I joined  the page  this website  and I saw many  persons  people  from all around the world,   and  that motivated me a little as I did not feel myself capable of helping others with my language; although I am native, I am not a teacher of my language! But I was wrong, and helping people with my native language has been much easier than I imagined.
With italki, I've been able to communicate with many people from different parts  of the world which I never thought it was possible to have a conversation with; ,  from China, Japan, Germany, and the United States. I´ve been able to practice my English and, surprisingly, speak German too. I´ve been able to communicate simply,  because,  in the end, we are all  persons  people  who have the same interests— learning one or various languages.

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Saying "persons" is not wrong.  However, native English speakers do not use this word in normal conversation or in normal writing.  In my experience, it is a very formal word used only in legal or scientific documents.

Be careful with the use of the semi-colon (;).  It is only rarely used in English writing.  Your first use was not wrong, but it made your first sentence extremely long.  Your second use was wrong; a semi-colon is not used to introduce a list.  If in doubt, use either a comma (,) or a full stop (.).

I'm not trying to tell you how to use English.  Your English is extremely good.  However, because your English is already extremely good, I hope my comments will help your English become closer to that used by a native speaker.