Hi Doris, 

I hope you're OK, and that life isn't all bad for you. I've made some corrections to help you with your English writing.

Life in Through My Eyes

Sometimes life is like sugars, full of sweet and memories.

Sometimes, life is just like a hole, which that takes back all your happiness and leaves out mounting depression and hopelessness.

Life in my eyes

sometimes life is like sugars,full of sweets and memories

sometimes,life is just like a hole,which takes back all your happiness and leaves out mounting depress depression and hopeless hopelessness.

I agree.  All you can do is remember the good times and learn from the bad.