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Pizza
Hey, i'm new in on this page site. My name is Fhermary, but you everyone calls me "Fher" it's more easy easier. The reason of my name is I was named 'Fher' because my parents love a Mexican band tha calls called "Maná". and The lead singer of the group is called his name is Fher soo... and Mary for is from my mom, so Fher+Mary=Fhermary hahahha! And I don't like that band anyway:(, they sounds like The Police, but The Police is better ;-). I do not know what I have to write about, but 'oh well'. I need to practice my English and the french too and French as well. The problem with the English is that I'm still thinking in Spanish and I don't have to should not, and because it's hard express myself this way. I dont know if you understand me but well well, and some occasion sometimes I think that I speak like Sofia Vergara hahahaha (!) I hope that my grammar it's is ok. So well, xoxoxo :D
Very good for a first entry :)
Pizza
Hey, i'm new to this page. My name is Fhermary, but you everyone calls me "Fher", it's easier. The reason behind my name is beacuse my parents love a Mexican band called "Maná" and the singer's name is Fher and Mary for my mom, so Fher+Mary=Fhermary hahahha. And i don't like the band :(, sounds like The Police, but The Police is better ;-). I do not know what i have to write, but well, I need to practice my English and the French, too. The problem with the English is that I'm still thinking in Spanish and I shouldn't, so it's hard to express myself. I dont know if you understand me but well, and sometimes I think that I speak like Sofia Vergara hahahaha. I hope that my grammar is ok. So well, xoxoxo :D
WELL WRITTEN BUT WHAT'S TO DO WITH PIZZA? HA,HA
Pizza
Hey, I'm new in this page to this website. My name is Fhermary, but you everyone calls me "Fher" because it's more easy easier. The reason origin of my name is beacuse my parents' love a mexican band tha calls for the Mexican band, "Maná." and The singer's his name is Fher soo... and Mary is for my mom, so Fher+Mary=Fhermary hahahha. And But I don't like that band :(. They sounds like The Police, but The Police is better ;-). I do not know what i have to write, but oh well. I need to practice my English, and the my French, too. The problem with the English is that I'm still thinking in Spanish and even though I don't have to shouldn't, and it's hard to express myself. I don't know if you understand me but oh well. and some occasion Sometimes I think that I speak like Sofia Vergara hahahaha. I hope that my grammar it's is ok. So Oh well, xoxoxo :D
Good job! Just remember that in English, you need to capitalize any word regarding nationality, i.e. Mexican band, Spanish language, etc. Also, we capitalize "I" because we are egotistical maniacs.
And there is nothing wrong with sounding like Sofia Vergara. She's great!
Pizza
Hey, i'm new in this page. My name is Fhermary, but you everyone calls me "Fher" it's more easy (better: easier). The origin of my name comes from the fact my parents love a mexican band that is called "Maná" and the singer, his name is Fher soo... and Mary for my mom, so Fher+Mary=Fhermary hahahha. And i don't like that band :(, sounds like The Police, but The Police is better ;-). I do not know what i have to write, but well. I need to practice my english and the french too. The problem with the english is that i'm still thinking in spanish and i don't have to, and it's hard express myself, i dont know if you understand me but well, and some occasion i think that i speak like Sofia Vergara hahahaha. I hope that my grammar it's ok. So well, xoxoxo :D
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