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Essay: "We cannot prevent the Eath's climate from changing". It's well known, The Earth's climate is rising up since several years ago. Furthermore, it is known that people are guilty of this increase. But the mainly point of this essay is if we can do anything to stop this. Personally, I think all can pick up our habits to improve the Earth's situation. First of all, many iniciatives are carried out to pick up the Earth's situation, for example: recycling. Nowadays, people are more socially aware of this problem, therefore, they are trying to recycle to take care of their home, the Earth. Secondly, not only is recycling the best form to look after the Earth, but also using public transport could be a good form to do it. Unfortunately, many people drive their cars to go to their jobs when they have the opportunity to catch the train, subway or ride their bikes. Let me conclude by saying, we can prevent the Earth's climate from changing, as a matter of fact, this is our home so if we don't take care of it, who will do it?

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Essay: "We cannot prevent the Eath's climate from changing".

It's well known that the Earth's climate temperature is rising [climate cannot rise, it can only change. Temperature rises] and has been for up since several years ago. Furthermore, it is known that people are guilty of responsible for this increase. But the mainly point of this essay is to question if we can do anything to stop this. Personally, I think we all can all pick up change/improve/moderate our habits to improve the Earth's situation.

First of all, many initiatives are have been carried out to pick up improve the Earth's situation, for example: recycling. Nowadays, people are more socially aware of this problem, and therefore, they are trying to recycle to take care of their home, the Earth.

Secondly, not only is recycling is not the only the best form way to look after the Earth, but we can also use public transport could be a good form to do it. Unfortunately, too many people drive their cars to go to their jobs work when they have the opportunity to catch the train, subway or ride their bikes.

Let me conclude by saying, we can prevent the Earth's climate from changing, and since as a matter of fact, this is our home so if we don't take care of it, who will do it?

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